WRITING
Introductions 1: Paraphrasing the question
Introductions 1: Paraphrasing the Question
There are many ways to write an introduction paragraph but a simple and tested technique is the following:
Paraphrase the question (use synonyms/ different parts of speech/ different word order etc.)
Give your opinion
Outline your 2 main ideas (which will be in body paragraphs 1 & 2)
Let’s begin by looking at how to paraphrase the IELTS question in your introduction.
Paraphrase the IELTS Question
a. Use the passive:
One of the best ways to begin is to change the active “some people believe” to the passive, “it is believed by some people” or vice-versa.
b. Use a similar, but different verb:
Verbs such as “argue”, “believe”, or “think” are interchangeable in this context. So, if the question says, “Some people believe”, you can write “It is argued by some people”, or just, “It is often argued”.
c. Use synonyms
In the rest of the sentence, look for synonyms which can replace words in the question. For example, “fixed” becomes “determined”, “develop” becomes “forms”, “personality” becomes “character”, and “because” becomes “due to”.
d. Change parts of speech or word order
You can also change parts of speech, word order or grammatical structure. For example, we develop our personality… becomes the development of our personality…
For more information on writing IELTS Writing Task 2 introductions go here.
Exercise:
Look at the underlined words/ phrases in the following IELTS Writing Task 2 questions. Think of at least one synonym/ parallel phrase for each. (Remember that the synonym needs to fit the context of the question).
i. Due to the fast pace of modern life an increasing number of people regularly eat fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
ii. Many people argue that restaurants should be required to disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
iii. Nowadays, people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
Activity:
Paraphrase the whole IELTS Writing Task 2 questions. Try to use synonyms, change word order, use the passive and use different parts of speech.
Example:
Some people prefer to eat at restaurants, whereas others prefer to eat home-made food.
Which do you prefer?
Paraphrase: While some people have a preference for eating out, others would rather prepare food and eat at home.
i. Due to the fast pace of modern life an increasing number of people regularly eat fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
ii. Many people argue that restaurants should be required to disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
iii. Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food?
What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
iv. Fast food restaurants are helpful because they save people time and effort in today’s busy world. Do you agree or disagree?
v. Many people believe that home-cooked meals are better for one’s health. Those who disagree argue that it is healthier to eat restaurant meals. What’s your opinion?
Exercise Answer Key:
due to: As a result of/ Owing to/ As a consequence of
fast pace: hectic/ extremely busy/ many responsibilities/ heavy demands
modern life: life nowadays/ modern world/ the way people live these days
increasing number: growing number/ rising number/ increasing quantity
regularly: often/ frequently
eat: consume/ rely on/ buy
Many people argue: It is often claimed/ It is argued by many people/ People frequently say/ A large number of people believe
should be required: it should be necessary/ a requirement should be imposed
disclose: publish/ show/ reveal
nutritional information: information on nutrition/ nutritional data/ nutritional content
dishes they serve: menu items/ food they offer/ dishes on the menu
Nowadays: These days/ In the modern world/ Currently
waste a lot of food: a lot of food is wasted/ throw away a large amount of food
bought: purchased
shops and restaurants: food retailers/ places selling food