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Writing Task 2 Model Answers

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19. Celebrations

Some people think we should make children take part in traditional festivals and celebrations.

Do you agree?

Essay Plan:

Opinion: Children should take part in traditional festivals and celebrations.


Main Idea 1: Celebrations connect children to their history.

  • Sub-idea A: Children learn about important historical events.

  • Sub-idea B: They are inspired to learn more.


Main Idea 2: Children can build connections in the community.

  • Sub-idea A: Children can make friends outside of their normal social circle.

  • Sub-idea B: They provide an excellent environment for building social connections.

Model Answer:

It is sometimes argued that it is essential to introduce children to traditional festivities and ensure they participate in them. I completely agree as traditional festivals and celebrations offer an opportunity for children to learn about their heritage, while also creating opportunities to make new social connections.


Each country has its own traditional celebrations that have roots in the country’s history. Such events help to create links to the past that allow children to understand their own history and culture in a deeper way. They are an opportunity for older generations to pass down their cultural knowledge. As an example, in the UK it is common to celebrate Guy Fawkes Night on 5th November. As a child this event inspired me to find out more about Guy Fawkes, as well as British politics in the early 17th century. In a similar way, children can be motivated to find out more about their own ancestors. Taking part in such events is a great way to push children in this direction.


Furthermore, such events are a fantastic way for children to meet other children in their community and to socialise. Usually, these events draw families from a wide area around where they take place, so children are able to make friends with kids outside of their normal social circles. In addition, traditional festivities and celebrations provide a focal point for the community, fostering community spirit, and therefore providing an excellent environment and atmosphere in which children can mingle and make new contacts. In effect, these events can be networking events which promote better relationships among children in the community.


In conclusion, children should be strongly encouraged or even forced to attend traditional festivals and celebrations. Not only can they learn more about their country or area's history, but they can be introduced to other children and widen their social circle.

*To see definitions and examples of the vocabulary in bold, along with practice exercises, go to Topic Vocabulary & Exercises.

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